Curtis, Two quick comments: 1. make the intent of the drawings clearer by identifying that the limited circulation is a problem. 2. The above is only of secondary importance, because the lack of "nature" is the real departure point of your project. Add a few annotated photos to make your point of introducing a building dominated by greenery plausible.
Curtis, You might also want to reference commonwealth ave on your plan. The city alloted a large amount of greenspace here around the residential but there isn't much of a presence around the pru. Peace.
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Curtis,
Two quick comments: 1. make the intent of the drawings clearer by identifying that the limited circulation is a problem. 2. The above is only of secondary importance, because the lack of "nature" is the real departure point of your project. Add a few annotated photos to make your point of introducing a building dominated by greenery plausible.
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Curtis,
You might also want to reference commonwealth ave on your plan. The city alloted a large amount of greenspace here around the residential but there isn't much of a presence around the pru. Peace.
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